Beta needed.

[schtroumph_c]

1) Ow! it hurts just behind and below my ear, near the end of my jaw when I yawn or eat or open the mouth too large. Two year ago, I'd never even think to how this phrase could be read.

2) I sorta have seen this coming, but the person I asked to beta my fic can't do it.

So, anyone want to? It's really short, 530 word, I don't trust my grammar.

Comments

[florahart]

Is it the one for the thing? I can look at it.

[schtroumph-c.livejournal.com]

Yeah, it's this one. Want my email, or...

[florahart]

roller2816 at hotmail dot com.

I'm away for ~an hour right now, but will look upon return, yeah?

[schtroumph-c.livejournal.com]

Ok, thanks you!

[florahart]

Okies, I think I've successfully sent it back to you, though hotmail to aol sometimes is less than wonderful about attachments. Holler that you got, okay?

[schtroumph-c.livejournal.com]

I received it! I never know when use will/would/won't/wouldn't.

Just need to add some names, and then I could I post it.

Thanks you again!

[schtroumph-c.livejournal.com]

If I can bother you again?


For my sake, I’ll act like if you said nothing, Harry.

Is this phrase OK?

[florahart]

Either, I'll act like you said, or I'll act as if you said.

:D

[schtroumph-c.livejournal.com]

At least I have the I'll right ;D. Thanks.